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An essay of a model's integration in a wider environment. Model : Clelia

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:iconurus28:
Ouaip j'approuve totallement :thumbsup: La compositon est particulièrement bien vue, je trouve juste dommage que la terre du fond soit finallement si ennuyeuse. Sinon c'est super =p

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:iconmboprey:
Oh. my. god.

This is beautiful.

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Beautiful shot. She just seems to belong there.

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:iconayehli:
I like this shot a great deal, and I've left it in my devwatch for a long time waiting to formulate my commentary on it.

I like the integration with the landscape, but I'm concerned that the shoreline intersects with the model at an inopportune place. I might have liked this even more if the shoreline had completely missed the model or, better, bisected her. The little bit of her that seems nipped off by the water's edge is distracting.

I might also have liked to see this image with no shoreline at all, but with only the model and her reflection in a tight crop, but that would have missed the point of your essay.

Beautiful image nonetheless.

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:iconearth-invasion:
Awesome colours and even better reflex!!! :clap: Still, I don't know if those flowers in the lower right corner would fit there right. I think it deviates the spectators look!

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Merci

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:iconjayphillips:
very nice!

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Thanks

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:iconbonsaisan:
İt very good reflection congratulation

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October 9, 2005
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Canon
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May 27, 2005, 6:30:35 PM

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